Thursday, 12 September 2013
What it's Like Being a Teenager
I really enjoy being a teenager because I can have fun and still be responsible. I like being a teenager because I could go to high school, make friends, get a locker and go to classes. All of those experiences are good and fun but my best experience is going places and rides with my friends. And that's what being a teenager is about. Hanging with friends and not caring about anything else. But not anything else just the small details. Being a teenager also comes with a price and that price is bullying or getting bullied at. That is probably the only thing that is hard abut being a teenager. I never had experience about bullying but I have encountered some small racism jokes over the years in high school. But I would toughen up and take it like a man. My experience as a teenager is not good or bad but just right.
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I agree with most of your ideas, but try to add a couple of more ideas in to it, you don't have to explain them all
ReplyDeleteyou should add more detail and make it a little longer.
ReplyDeleteother than that i agree with you
i areee with you but maybe add paragraphs and expand your reasons. I like the ending. :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like you are enjoying school. I did too, for many of the same reasons. You're lucky you feel so safe with your peers.
ReplyDeletetry to use alot more examples that everyone else can relate to too,overall it was great
ReplyDeleteI like your sentence structure and the way you ended it. I agree with you.
ReplyDeleteI love how you put important keys like bullying in high school because that is a major thing, but I agree with Sukhleen that you should have expanded your reasons.
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